Bonjour est ce que quelqu'un peut me corriger svp c'est pour demain :( I have chosen to presents an article of quality press whose name is « Brtual Images of Sy
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Bonjour est ce que quelqu'un peut me corriger svp c'est pour demain :(
I have chosen to presents an article of quality press whose name is « Brtual Images of Syrian Boy drowned off Turkey Must be seen, Activist Say» .
I think is an article of qualitfy press because it deals wich an important subject.
This article talk about the death of the young refugees, old 3 years-old.
He's dead because with his family, they have tried to rejoin an other country for avoid the war in Syria. His body have been discovered by a Turkish police officer on the beach «face down in the sand». The Aylan's death at to leave people deeply saddened, many organizations of media organized several debate for know which published picture, some organizations decided to published a rather hard picture about the Aylan's death for to react people whereas others organizations want to published a softer picture ecause they don't want Aylan's become a symbol of refugees.
After the announcement of Aylan's death Omer Mohsin «a survivor of the capsizing» wish to tell the living conditions of refugees, he explains there are many persons in a boat with a limited capacity for received each refugees wishing avoid the war and we can think this is one of leading cause of death.
I think it's a shame for waiting the death of young boy or an adult person to react the people, it's just unlikely ! This is representative of our society, everyone expects that something is going to finally react and now many people think it's necessary to help this refugees, much debate taking place about it here.
This picture has revolt many people which raised awareness that their act was better instead of acting as if nothing is happening.
This article affects me personally and it's for that I have chosen it, it's was very important for to denounce this comportement because this little boy and everyone who have sudden the war asked nothing anybody and every country should show solidarity, it does not mean that what arrives at them does not concern us.
I have chosen to presents an article of quality press whose name is « Brtual Images of Syrian Boy drowned off Turkey Must be seen, Activist Say» .
I think is an article of qualitfy press because it deals wich an important subject.
This article talk about the death of the young refugees, old 3 years-old.
He's dead because with his family, they have tried to rejoin an other country for avoid the war in Syria. His body have been discovered by a Turkish police officer on the beach «face down in the sand». The Aylan's death at to leave people deeply saddened, many organizations of media organized several debate for know which published picture, some organizations decided to published a rather hard picture about the Aylan's death for to react people whereas others organizations want to published a softer picture ecause they don't want Aylan's become a symbol of refugees.
After the announcement of Aylan's death Omer Mohsin «a survivor of the capsizing» wish to tell the living conditions of refugees, he explains there are many persons in a boat with a limited capacity for received each refugees wishing avoid the war and we can think this is one of leading cause of death.
I think it's a shame for waiting the death of young boy or an adult person to react the people, it's just unlikely ! This is representative of our society, everyone expects that something is going to finally react and now many people think it's necessary to help this refugees, much debate taking place about it here.
This picture has revolt many people which raised awareness that their act was better instead of acting as if nothing is happening.
This article affects me personally and it's for that I have chosen it, it's was very important for to denounce this comportement because this little boy and everyone who have sudden the war asked nothing anybody and every country should show solidarity, it does not mean that what arrives at them does not concern us.
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I've chosen to present a press article of quality which name is "Brutal images of Syrian Boy drowned off.........."
To me, it's a very good article (attention aux répétitions "quality") because it deals with an important subject which is happening now. This article talks about this 3 years old refugee boy's death. He died because he and his family were trying to join Europe to escape from the Syrian 's war. His body was discovered by on the beach, facedown in the sand by a Turquish police officer. Aylan'death left people deeply schoked. Some organisations (organisations or newspapers ??) decided to publish a rather hard picture whereas some prefered to publish a softer picture to avoid that Aylan could become a symbol for refugges.
After the announcement of Aylan'death, Omer Moshin "a survivor of the ? (tu as voulu dire naufrage ? = wreck) wanted to tell about the refugees' s conditions of life in those boats, which are like small nut's schell, where they are piled up : children, old persons, pregnant women and babies, no matter the real capacity of the boat.
Personally, I think it's a shame to have been waiting for the image of Aylan's death to react at last... It shows how some persons are cowards ; they just don't want to know, They close their eyes and ears until the reality splashed on them. And now, only now, they are finally aware ot the gravity of the situation.
I was particularly affected by this article. I wanted to point out this behaviour. Everyone should be concerned before seeing a oung boy dead. We must support those people and feel concerned by what's happening.
Ya des fois (à la fin) ou j'ai peut-être un peu trop changé mais j'arrivais pas vraiment à te suivre
j'espère que ça ira
bonne soirée