Bonjour, Est ce que quelqu’un peu corriger cette lettre merci d'avance Dear Olivia , I'm having a great time here in NYC ! Jack has shown me everything ! (We
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Bonjour, Est ce que quelqu’un peu corriger cette lettre merci d'avance
Dear Olivia ,
I'm having a great time here in NYC ! Jack has shown me everything ! (We have breath-talking and thrilling)Rockfeller center, Central Park, Ellis Island and the statue of liberty . It's so funny and hot . We staying in a hotel next to Central park. The room is lovely. Tomorow we are going to Shopping on the 5th avenues( It's a shopaholic heaven) ! But, it's also very expensive .. NYC is such an amazing city. These holidays are the best of my life !!!
Wish you were here.
Love Emma XO
Dear Olivia ,
I'm having a great time here in NYC ! Jack has shown me everything ! (We have breath-talking and thrilling)Rockfeller center, Central Park, Ellis Island and the statue of liberty . It's so funny and hot . We staying in a hotel next to Central park. The room is lovely. Tomorow we are going to Shopping on the 5th avenues( It's a shopaholic heaven) ! But, it's also very expensive .. NYC is such an amazing city. These holidays are the best of my life !!!
Wish you were here.
Love Emma XO
2 Réponse
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1. Réponse Fairylia
Bonsoir, il y a une faute à "Tomorow". Ça s’écrit avec deux R, donc "Tomorrow"
Voila, j’espère que ça t'aura été utile . -
2. Réponse missxsafya
talking = taking
Rockfeller = Rockefeller
staying = are staying
Tomorow = Tomorrow