donc voila j'ai fini mon dialogue et demain je serais noté sur sa : si il y à des erreurs de syntaxe ou bien d'autre choses que vous remarquer merci de préciser
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donc voila j'ai fini mon dialogue et demain je serais noté sur sa : si il y à des erreurs de syntaxe ou bien d'autre choses que vous remarquer merci de préciser pour je me corrige :)
so one day l was with my friends, then boyka told me that he wanted to join the army So I decided to make him change Avis
Gökan (Worried) :Well,you should know that the army is very dangerous.
Boyka (Shaking his head) : Listen, in the army i feel in security
Gökan (surprised) : er,you will suffer
Boyka : I am ready !
Gökan :i'm afraid not and you can be injured
Boyka (frightened) : I can overcome !
Gökan (pointing in the finger) : you can die !
Boyka (terrified) :Well... agree I would not go
so one day l was with my friends, then boyka told me that he wanted to join the army So I decided to make him change Avis
Gökan (Worried) :Well,you should know that the army is very dangerous.
Boyka (Shaking his head) : Listen, in the army i feel in security
Gökan (surprised) : er,you will suffer
Boyka : I am ready !
Gökan :i'm afraid not and you can be injured
Boyka (frightened) : I can overcome !
Gökan (pointing in the finger) : you can die !
Boyka (terrified) :Well... agree I would not go
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1. Réponse Douggy
Pour la premiere phrase "so I decided to make him change his mind" La troisième "listen, in the army I feel safe" La dernière : " well.... You're right, I won't go"