qui peut me corriger mon texte en angglais svp aider moi: Hi my name is Manar I 'm 13 , I live in Perpignan I have 4sisters and brothers . I play basketball and
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qui peut me corriger mon texte en angglais svp aider moi:
Hi
my name is Manar I 'm 13 , I live in Perpignan I have 4sisters and brothers . I play basketball and tennis. my favourite subject is English French and espagnol . I going to a school who's called himself saint Louis gonzagues .I am a very nice high . all my friends are half- boarder .and I am externe.L'ecole 8:05 it starts there's a break 10:10 ET is the hour of the meal east 12 pm and includes the course in 1:55 p.m. a pause 3:45 p.m. ET has 16 hours 55 enters expensive us. I enter the first I tidy my room I take my shower I did my duty dinne I brush my teeth and my phone when I use not much duty and 10:30 p.m. I go to sleep and the next morning I getting up at 6:30 ET his party to go to school during the weekend I mask makes me care for my skin and my hair and occasionally I out shopping with my mother and with my or my seour friends
See you
Manar xxxxx
Hi
my name is Manar I 'm 13 , I live in Perpignan I have 4sisters and brothers . I play basketball and tennis. my favourite subject is English French and espagnol . I going to a school who's called himself saint Louis gonzagues .I am a very nice high . all my friends are half- boarder .and I am externe.L'ecole 8:05 it starts there's a break 10:10 ET is the hour of the meal east 12 pm and includes the course in 1:55 p.m. a pause 3:45 p.m. ET has 16 hours 55 enters expensive us. I enter the first I tidy my room I take my shower I did my duty dinne I brush my teeth and my phone when I use not much duty and 10:30 p.m. I go to sleep and the next morning I getting up at 6:30 ET his party to go to school during the weekend I mask makes me care for my skin and my hair and occasionally I out shopping with my mother and with my or my seour friends
See you
Manar xxxxx
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1. Réponse jadballouk
salut ;) il y a juste quelques fautes :
1)on dit spanish et pas espagnol
2)la phrase qui suit "espagnol" est fausse tu dois dire "i go to a school called saint Louis Gonzague.
3) je te fais la suite pq c'est pas bon :/ :
i am a hard-working student. All my friends are half-boarders but i'm self catering. Scholl starts at 8:05 AM, there's a break at 10:10 AM. The Lunch break is at 12 o clock.(la suite je comprend rien :/ :O)........ When i get back home, i clean my room, take a shower , i do my homeworks then i brush my teeth and i go to bed. Every morning, i wake up at 6:30 AM . During the weekend, i take care of my skin and hair and sometimes i go shopping with my mother and my sister and her friends.
See you