Bonsoir, J'ai un oral en Anglais Européen, pouvez vous me corriger le texte s'il vous plait. =) My name is ______, I’m fourteen. I was born on 8th of January 2
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Bonsoir,
J'ai un oral en Anglais Européen, pouvez vous me corriger le texte s'il vous plait. =)
"My name is ______, I’m fourteen.
I was born on 8th of January 2001
I’m from France
I have got 1 sister and my parents are married
I was born in ___________ and I live in ________.
I’m Capricorn like Mel Gibson and Kate Middletone.
I want to be a trader in Wall Street when i grow up.
I would like to go in New York City
My idols are Dan Carter and Rafael Nadal.
I’m patient, practical, good tempered and hard working.
I don’t like people who pretend to be superior than you.
I enjoy playing video games when I have got free time. I play every day and I spent 2 or 3 hours a day. I like playing tennis too.
Although I don't play rugby, I like watching Rugby World Cup match with my father."
J'ai un oral en Anglais Européen, pouvez vous me corriger le texte s'il vous plait. =)
"My name is ______, I’m fourteen.
I was born on 8th of January 2001
I’m from France
I have got 1 sister and my parents are married
I was born in ___________ and I live in ________.
I’m Capricorn like Mel Gibson and Kate Middletone.
I want to be a trader in Wall Street when i grow up.
I would like to go in New York City
My idols are Dan Carter and Rafael Nadal.
I’m patient, practical, good tempered and hard working.
I don’t like people who pretend to be superior than you.
I enjoy playing video games when I have got free time. I play every day and I spent 2 or 3 hours a day. I like playing tennis too.
Although I don't play rugby, I like watching Rugby World Cup match with my father."
2 Réponse
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1. Réponse Chocolol
Tu peux dire I've got ( ce que ma conseillé ma prof' ) ça fait moins lourd ^^ ! sinon après je vois aucune faute ! -
2. Réponse Jadlynn
"I'm from France" serait plus correct en "I live in France" ou "I'm French".
I've got est aussi possible.
Kate Middleton sans "e" à la fin.
sinon je n'ai pas vu d'autres fautes x