# URGENT 16 POINTS # Bonjour, qqun peut me corriger se texte,svp?(si vous pensez à d'autres choses ajoutez-les svp je ne suis pas douer ;-) ) Sujet: Bullying I
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# URGENT 16 POINTS #
Bonjour,
qqun peut me corriger se texte,svp?(si vous pensez à d'autres choses ajoutez-les svp je ne suis pas douer ;-) )
Sujet: Bullying
I don't understand bulying.
A lot of people are bullying and this is unfair because the victims are scared.
The victims are bullying "psycologiquement et physiquement"and theyr bother "pendant longtemps".
The problem is the bully because they nigger of things unbearable.
I can't stand the bullys. They disturb the class.
They must ashamed of his attitude.
De plus there a physically bullying.
I think we must reassure friendly, nice and open-minded with the victims.
The people urge th bullies are also rude.
The victims must to complain but it is very difficult for him.
It's difficult to stand up to defend the victims because this is not" notre affaire" but we must reassure the victims.
I like the bullys when they apologize but"le mal est fait".But him problem is that they are narrow minded.
the cyber bullying is worse that the bullying at school because the bullys is invisible.
the bullys spread a gossip on the web and a lot of people see.
The victims are "toucher" in the class and on the web.
Bonjour,
qqun peut me corriger se texte,svp?(si vous pensez à d'autres choses ajoutez-les svp je ne suis pas douer ;-) )
Sujet: Bullying
I don't understand bulying.
A lot of people are bullying and this is unfair because the victims are scared.
The victims are bullying "psycologiquement et physiquement"and theyr bother "pendant longtemps".
The problem is the bully because they nigger of things unbearable.
I can't stand the bullys. They disturb the class.
They must ashamed of his attitude.
De plus there a physically bullying.
I think we must reassure friendly, nice and open-minded with the victims.
The people urge th bullies are also rude.
The victims must to complain but it is very difficult for him.
It's difficult to stand up to defend the victims because this is not" notre affaire" but we must reassure the victims.
I like the bullys when they apologize but"le mal est fait".But him problem is that they are narrow minded.
the cyber bullying is worse that the bullying at school because the bullys is invisible.
the bullys spread a gossip on the web and a lot of people see.
The victims are "toucher" in the class and on the web.
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1. Réponse nathea
I don't understand " bullying".
Lots of people are victims of this social phenomena .
They are bullyied in a physical and psychological way. They get really scared, and they can stay traumatised for a long time.
If you're a nigger a,mueslim, wear different clothes, just look different from them, they'll find any opportinities in or outside the college or on the social networks to be after you every second of your life.
You're beaten, treated as if you were nothing and with the social networks, they can say any thing they want and spread false rumors about you.
I just can't stand that. It's unfair, no one does anything.
We would like to help but it's sometimes very difficult because those who are bullyied don't speak about it They should complain , but they're so scared, they prefer not to talk and stay silent.
Many think it's none of our business(ce n'est pas notre affaire) but it's every one business. How long are we going to stay so selfish (égoïste) and are we going to close our eyes.....All we are, is being coward (tout ce qu'on est, c'est être lâche).
If it was happening to my sister or brother or best friend, would I or my friends react ??? And if it was happening to me......will someone help me ??
Those "bulliers" should be severely punished, I don't know how, to really realize what they do. Maybe work with handicaped people....they should be obliged to see psychologists regularly...
And in the schools, the school staff should be more careful and aware of what's happening around them . It's every one business. Let's help each others.
je t'ai carrément refait un autre texte sur le harcèlement !!!! désolé, je suis parti sur mon élan parce que c'est qqchose qui me hérisse (un de mes copains s'est pendu y a 2 ans; il avait 13 ans....!!!)
je sais que j'ai beaucoup dévié, mais dis-moi si ça te va ou pas