Bonjour, qqun peut me corriger se texte,svp?(si vous pensez à d'autres choses ajoutez-les svp je ne suis pas douer ;-) ) Sujet: Bullying I don't understand buly
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Bonjour,
qqun peut me corriger se texte,svp?(si vous pensez à d'autres choses ajoutez-les svp je ne suis pas douer ;-) )
Sujet: Bullying
I don't understand bulying.
A lot of people are bullying and this is unfair because the victims are scared.
The victims are bullying "psycologiquement et physiquement"and theyr bother "pendant longtemps".
The problem is the bully because they nigger of things unbearable.
I can't stand the bullys. They disturb the class.
They must ashamed of his attitude.
De plus there a physically bullying.
I think we must reassure friendly, nice and open-minded with the victims.
The people urge th bullies are also rude.
The victims must to complain but it is very difficult for him.
It's difficult to stand up to defend the victims because this is not" notre affaire" but we must reassure the victims.
I like the bullys when they apologize but"le mal est fait".But him problem is that they are narrow minded.
the cyber bullying is worse that the bullying at school because the bullys is invisible.
the bullys spread a gossip on the web and a lot of people see.
The victims are "toucher" in the class and on the web.
qqun peut me corriger se texte,svp?(si vous pensez à d'autres choses ajoutez-les svp je ne suis pas douer ;-) )
Sujet: Bullying
I don't understand bulying.
A lot of people are bullying and this is unfair because the victims are scared.
The victims are bullying "psycologiquement et physiquement"and theyr bother "pendant longtemps".
The problem is the bully because they nigger of things unbearable.
I can't stand the bullys. They disturb the class.
They must ashamed of his attitude.
De plus there a physically bullying.
I think we must reassure friendly, nice and open-minded with the victims.
The people urge th bullies are also rude.
The victims must to complain but it is very difficult for him.
It's difficult to stand up to defend the victims because this is not" notre affaire" but we must reassure the victims.
I like the bullys when they apologize but"le mal est fait".But him problem is that they are narrow minded.
the cyber bullying is worse that the bullying at school because the bullys is invisible.
the bullys spread a gossip on the web and a lot of people see.
The victims are "toucher" in the class and on the web.
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1. Réponse Tetsuna
"The victims are bullied psychologically and physically and they are bothered for a long time"
"They must BE* ashamed"
"Plus, there's a physical bullying"
"I think we must be friendly, nice and open-minded..."
"The people who urge the bullies..."
"The victims must complain but this is very difficult for them"
"..because this is not our doing"
"...but the damage is done. But the problem is that they are narrow-minded"
"...is worse than the bullying..."
"The victims are affected in the class..."
Voila pour les petite aides ^^ Sinon, je pense que tu te répète un peu trop. Tu devais arranger ton paragraphe et mettre les choses ensemble :)