Bonsoir, puis je avoir votre aide ou plutôt votre avis sur ce texte: The apartheid is a political regim of discrimination racial, fonded from 1948 The political

Bonsoir, puis je avoir votre aide ou plutôt votre avis sur ce texte:
The apartheid is a political regim of discrimination racial, fonded from 1948

The political regim, was to allow a separate development the various communities of the country ,
The apartheid is a racist ideology, founded on a myth : the White would constitute chosen people and would be threatened by the interbreeding and the black population
In 1950 , the government makes vote the first of the segregationist laws, there are 4 group racial :
-White, mainly descendants of European immigrants . -Blacks and Batoustans - Coloureds -The Asiatics
and a law obliges each group to lie in preset urban areas of dwelling
In 1953, the public places are the object of separation. In 1959 , the country is divided into several zones .
Finally, after much struggle, the South African government ended apartheid in 1994 . After that, equal rights were shared among both black and whites in law. Nelson Mandela became president when apartheid was ended. Nelson Mandela fought against apartheid throughout his life.
Y a t-il des fautes ou est ce que c'est bien anglais??