Quelqu'un peut me dire si mon texte présente des fautes ? My name is ..... . I'm 16. I would like to participate to The Voice because I'm a huge fan of music, m
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Quelqu'un peut me dire si mon texte présente des fautes ?
My name is ..... . I'm 16. I would like to participate to The Voice because I'm a huge fan of music, more precisely Rock'n'Roll and Country music since I'm little. I've been playing piano for 1 year and recently I learned how to play guitar. It's a dream for me to sing in front of a lot of people, I think I have the capacities for succeed. I'm not shy and in addition (en plus de... ?) of being motivated, I'm competitor. That's why I think I'm the best candidate for this show.
My name is ..... . I'm 16. I would like to participate to The Voice because I'm a huge fan of music, more precisely Rock'n'Roll and Country music since I'm little. I've been playing piano for 1 year and recently I learned how to play guitar. It's a dream for me to sing in front of a lot of people, I think I have the capacities for succeed. I'm not shy and in addition (en plus de... ?) of being motivated, I'm competitor. That's why I think I'm the best candidate for this show.
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1. Réponse nathea
My name is... I'm 16. I'd love to participate to the Voice because, since my early years, I've always been a huge fan of music as Rock'n Roll and Country music.
I have been playing the piano since one year and now I'm learning how to play the guitar. It's a real dream for me to sing in front so much people.I really think I've the abilities to suceed. I'm not shy and moreover my motivation is extreme. That's why I think I would be one of the best candidates for this show.
Bonne soirée -
2. Réponse PhoenixFire
Oui même si on peut améliorer un peu sinon franchement pas mal !