bonjour j avais un texte a faire pour raconter une image qui représentait un homme mort , du verre brisé , une chaussure a coté et une fenetre ouverte donc vo
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bonjour j avais un texte a faire pour raconter une image qui représentait un homme mort , du verre brisé , une chaussure a coté et une fenetre ouverte donc voici ce que j ai ecrit mais je pense qu il y des fautes merci de m aider
the man was dead. i thought a girl killed the man with a weapon and she had lost a shoe . she had enter with a rope , she assassinated the man for money . they had battled because the man had a knife, we can seen objects destroyed , she had lost money when she ran or in the battle . we can seen a rope because the Windows was opened
the man was dead. i thought a girl killed the man with a weapon and she had lost a shoe . she had enter with a rope , she assassinated the man for money . they had battled because the man had a knife, we can seen objects destroyed , she had lost money when she ran or in the battle . we can seen a rope because the Windows was opened
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1. Réponse yanndolon7
il y a peut-être un peu de répétion et tu pourrais un peu enrichir le texte en utilisant du vocabulaire varié