Bonsoir je dois faire ce sujet pour demain c'est une préparation a une expression orale en continue , je sais déjà que je veux parler du métier de trader Situta

Bonjour,
J'ai ça:
"I really want to be a trader because this look amazing and entertaining, I know i have to take loads of responsibilities and have to make loads of studies, but i'll do my best to become a trader. I'll really like to have some support for this project, I hope you are with me for the hard studies i'll do in the future."
Have a good day.